Warrior Story #1

                 Change of Heart 

              Chapter 1 Meet Mistkit

Mistkit, the only daughter of Raventalon and Stormyheart sat alone at the edge of the nursery when she should be asleep. Her eyes opened only a moment ago, and she looked up to the stars, wondering what she was meant for.

5 weeks later . . .

Question: 
"Hey Mistkit, do you want to go outside and play?" asks Thrushkit, (one of your denmates) you reply:

Choices: 
Sure!
I'd love to.
Never, I don't even like you.
Maybe.
Do I have to?

Question: 
As you two are playing, Thrushkit asks you,
"So, Mistkit, I can't wait till it's time to be apprenticed, I want to be a warrior, how about you?"

Choices: 
Me too!
Nah, I'm going to be Clan Leader!
Medicine Cat always!
I'm going to be an Elder!

Question: 
"Mistkit, do you want to go out of the camp of a minute, it would be so cool to see the forest, don't you agree?" Thrushkit asks,

Choices: 
No! we'll get in trouble for sure!
Sure, whatever you say.
Okay.
Yes! I'm bored as heck.
>(

Question: 
"Actually, let's not go," You finally say, letting your good judgement take over.
"We can explore the camp."
"Okay, I'm fine with whatever you want to do." Thrushkit says, together, you two check out the medicine den, the apprentice den, and the elders den. Bored, you wander away from Thrushkit into a cave in the side of a huge rock. You notice a jet black tom perched in a bed of moss and ferns.

"Ah, you must be my young niece, Raventalon's your father, correct? I'm your uncle, Nightstar, leader of ThunderClan."
"Nice to meet you." you reply calmly,
"Well, my young niece, I'm beginning to like you already." Nightstar says walking up to you, he licks your head, a purr rumbling in his throat. You really like your uncle too, suddenly, a brown she-cat dashes in.
"Nightstar! We encountered a ShadowClan patrol, we chased them away, but Raventalon . . ." The she-cat begins sobbing so hard she can hardly speak.
"Hawkpaw? What happened to Raventalon?" Nightstar asks, completely and utterly worried.
"Raventalon was murdered by a Twoleg moster." Hawkpaw chokes out.
"Nooooo!" Nightstar wails, you're sad, but you never really knew your father so you can't very well grieve for him, but you are sad. You vow to take revenge on ShadowClan, but not until you're older.
"We shall mourn our loss, but now, I must name the new deputy." You leave, very confused, when you run into Blueflower, the medicine cat's apperentice.
"You are Mistkit? Ah, good. Good, good. I have been longing to meet you, but Appleberry wouldn't let me." Blueflower leaves almost as quickly as she came, as is soon replaced by Thrushkit.
"Mistkit, Mistkit, I'm going to be an apprentice!"
"How?"
"I'm six moons old now." Thrushkit says shyly,
you haven't noticed before, but now she saw that Thrushkit was gigantic. You say:

Choices: 
I'm happy for you.
*gasp* You're huge! O_O
I wanna be an apprentice too! >(
I don't care, I hate you.

Question: 
"Well, see you." Thrushkit says as he walks away leaving you alone in the now moonlit clearing. Suddenly, a starry cat walks up to you, though his pelt is starry it is pure black.
"Father!" you instinctively gasp,
"Hello, daughter." he purrs warmly, pressing up against you, purring.
"Oh, father." you sigh, after you two finish catching up on lost time, your father tells you.
"Mistkit, you will save the Clan by keeping to your true path, please do the same for another who's sight is not as clear as yours." Raventalon fades, then, you hear Nightstar calling all cats to the Highrock.

----------------to-be continued----------------

Did you like this poll? (Part 2 will be longer.)

Choices: 
Yes, I can't wait for Part 2!
No, don't ever make a poll again.
It was okay.
I hate Thrushkit's guts! X(

Question: 
Will you post? Please?

Choices: 
Of course!
Yeah.
Maybe.
No.
Never.

Question: 
I'm going to leave you alone after this, I promise.

Choices: 
Okay, bye!
See ya!
Get lost already!
Good riddence!

                            Chapter 2 Apprenticeship 
  Thrushpaw! the young tom thought proudly, he was an apprentice now and would be able to sleep in the apprentice den. It hurt him to leave Mistkit, but there wasn't anything he could do about that. 


Mistkit was feeling semi-lethargic, Tigerfur had just had her litter of five and Willowclaw had her litter of two. All in all, eight kits and three queens made the nursery crowded and the mewling of kits was did not allow sleeping easily. 3 weeks! 3 weeks! it would be until she was even old enough for apprenticeship. To recap on all the recent events, Thrushkit had been made Thrushpaw, Hawkpaw had become Hawkeye, Redpaw had become Redstorm, and Springpaw had become Springheart. Thrushpaw's mentor was one of the senior warriors, Wildfire, who had become deputy after Raventalon's demise, and . . .Ack! Mistkit was about ready to give Sorrelkit a good cuff on the head, the dumb kit did not cease mewing!
Question: 
What do you do?

Choices: 
Cuff Sorrelkit on the head.
Plug your ears.
Tell Willowclaw
Hurl Sorrelkit across the nursery.
Tell Sorrelkit he's making too much noise.

Question: 
"Sorrelkit, you're making too much noise!" you mew softly.
"Oh, sorry. I didn't realize I was bothering you, so sorry!"
"It's okay." You say, and now that Sorrelkit is quiet, you can finally go to sleep. Suddenly, you burst awake, you're laying on mound rocky earth. You spring to your paws and gasp in dismay. Before you, there is a shallow lake of rushing red liquid, you can tell it's blood.
"Be careful of your heart, it can betray you." a hushed voice murmurs.The bodies of Nightstar, Stormyheart and Thrushpaw can be seen in the crimson tide.
"Beware, Mistkit! evil is a thick, choking smog that will kill anything that gets in its way." the voice cries. The blood lake seems to get deeper, until it is about to overflow, you tuck your tail and run at high-speed, but the blood catches up to you. It laps hungrily at your fur, it gets in your mouth, choking and gagging you, finally, it sweeps over your head, and everything goes black.

"Mistkit, wake up, wake up, everything's okay!" a voice calls out to you. You open your eyes, Stormyheart is standing over you, along with a very concerned Thrushpaw.
"What happened? You were screaming my name loud enough for all of StarClan to hear, that, and something about a blood lake." Thrushpaw asks softly.
You reply:

Choices: 
Get lost, I don't even like you.
It was a sign from StarClan.
Nothing, at all.
It's none of your business!

Question: 
You try to speak, but you are too stunned. 
"Let her rest." Stormyheart tells Thrushpaw, Thrushpaw reluctantly leaves, you shiver and nuggle up close to Stormyheart. She licks you from head to tail, purring,
"Don't worry my darling kit, I won't let anything happen to you." As embarrassing as it is, your mother's words comfort you, and you fall into a deep, contented sleep. 

"All cats old enough to catch their own prey, gather beneath the Highrock for a Clan meeting!" Nightstar yowls. You and Stormyheart pad up to the Highrock, you both know what's coming.
"This moonhigh, we gather to name one new apprentice, please come forward Mistkit." Nightstar beckons you with his tail. You leave Stormyheart's side and stroll up to the Highrock.
"From this day forward, until you have earned your warrior name, you shall be known as Mistpaw. Hawkeye, you are ready for your first apprentice, you were fortunate enough to have two mentors, I hope you will pass on everything that Raventalon and Maplewhisker taught you." you think:

Choices: 
Yes, I wanted Hawkeye!
Darn, I got Hawkeye.
I wanted Nightstar!
I wanted Redstorm!
I wanted Springheart!

Question: 
Well, either way, you have Hawkeye as your mentor. Now you get to move out of the nursery and into the apprentice den. It is kind of empty, there's only Thrushpaw, Brindlepaw, Sandpaw, and you now. 
"Mistpaw, we're going to start training, are you ready?" Hawkeye asks, padding up behind you.

Choices: 
Yeah!
I guess so.
Bring it on!
I'm not listening to you, never to you.
Blah, blah, blah.

Question: 
Hawkeye takes you out to check and learn about the borders, which is useful, but kind of boring, but you clam up and don't say anything.
"Am I boring you?" Hawkeye asks, a mischievous gleam in her copper eyes.

Choices: 
No, no, I'm excited as I can be!
Well, duh!
No, I'm learning.
Heck, yes!
Maybe.
Blah, blah, blah.

Question: 
"Then follow me, if you can keep up!" Hawkeye sprints off into the trees. You race after her, finally, you two stop, the hollow is covered with sand.
"Well, you said you were bored," Hawkeye says darkly, "I thought if you were good while I showed you our territory I'd have a special treat for you, and now I'll deliver, time to teach you some battle moves!"

Choices: 
Wait, Hawkeye????
Wow, you're okay.
You're awesome Hawkeye!
I still don't like you.
Blah, blah, blah.

Question: 
You and Hawkeye practice for the rest of the day, you feel pretty good. Hawkeye praises you, and says to go take something off the fresh-kill pile and to go have a good time. You walk over the fresh-kill pile, you select a plump vole and go off to eat it. Thrushpaw takes a chafinch and joins you, You:

Choices: 
Continue eating.
Stop and greet Thrushpaw.
Get up and move.
Yowl: "Get LOST!"
Can't Thrushpaw take a hint?

Question: 
The next day, Hawkeye takes you hunting. You notice a big squirrel perched on a tree root. Silently, you creep towards it, you rock back and forth, and you pounce! So, did you nail the squirrel, or did you miss?

Choices: 
I nailed it!
I missed . . . .

Question: 
(If you missed, Hawkeye got the squirrel instead, bummer.)
"Wow! Mistpaw, that, that's easily the biggest squirrel I've seen in my life!" Hawkeye gasps, although you're proud, the squrriel is very heavy, but you manage to carry it into camp. Everyone is proud of you, and you get a lot of praise. You go over to the nursery to check on the kits, 
"Mistpaw!" you hear Sorrelkit yell, but his voice is coming from behind you.
"Mistpaw, come quick! It's my brother, Smokekit, he isn't moving!"

Choices: 
Let's go get Appleberry!
Smokekit?
Yeah, sure.
Let's go right away!

Question: 
You race to were Sorrelkit says Smokekit is. You see the remains of several bright red berries next to him, you know they are Deathberries. What do you do?

Choices: 
Oh no, oh no, what do I do?
Go to the Medicine den right away!
Let him lay there.
Do I care? No.

Question: 
You race to the Medicine Den, Appleberry is there, treating several cats.
"Appleberry, Smokekit swallowed Deathberries, what do I do?"
"Oh, I can't leave, here, take this yarrow and give it to him, pray to StarClan you make it back to him in time!"
--------------to-be continued----------------
So, how did you like this poll?

Choices: 
It was great!
It could be better.
It was okay.
I hated it.

Question: 
Will you post?

Choices: 
Of course!
Yeah.
Maybe.
No.
Never.

Question: 
Bye! Part 3 will be out soon.

Choices: 
Great! I can't wait.
Bye!
See ya!
Get lost!
Good riddence.